this is a delightful poem, very consistent though apparently short – with a certain haikuish air :). sheer beauty! and perfectly fitting the image prompt!
I love the simplicity in your poem, as well as the Zen/Haiku ‘feel’ to it Marousia. It really is a ‘mirror’ image of “Blue on Blue,” in words. Thank you so very much! Roger ☺
M, you are a painter with paints and a painter with words. This poem represents the essence of poetry: a distilled concentrate of its subject; and it’s delightful. Well done!
this is a delightful poem, very consistent though apparently short – with a certain haikuish air :). sheer beauty! and perfectly fitting the image prompt!
I love the simplicity in your poem, as well as the Zen/Haiku ‘feel’ to it Marousia. It really is a ‘mirror’ image of “Blue on Blue,” in words. Thank you so very much! Roger ☺
nice…short, sweat but filled with imagery…congrats on winning marousia
Beautiful words!! Imagery so real; effortlessly picture comes alive in mind. Congratulation for the win.
I’ll follow your poetry anywhere, even to strange blogs. 🙂
Simply beautiful, Marousia ~ huge congratulations on winning the competition 🙂
Spot on! You contained the beauty of the image without bubbling over. Congratulations, a well deserved posting.
M, you are a painter with paints and a painter with words. This poem represents the essence of poetry: a distilled concentrate of its subject; and it’s delightful. Well done!
Beautiful little poem that takes me to a beautiful little place on a beautiful day….. So vivid yet so compact! Well Deserving indeed!
A joy … 😉